Weathering the Adolescent Storm: A Place Further Than the Universe and Liberation


The girls are alright! And mulling over existential conceits. You know, usual four-girls-in-a-club stuff.


Even defined by gangly limbs and uncertainty, stumbling into middle adolescence is something of a landmark event; behavioural milestones exhibited via individuals caught in the throes of a fierce rebellion coursing through their veins, clutching their heart. An egocentric call to arms that demands something different, something that matters. From its very first frame, A Place Further Than the Universe is a show that finds itself submerged in the developmental storm of searching for individuality that much of adolescence – and indeed, life in general – is concerned with. An often arduous quest that takes one to the furthest reaches of their own personal universe, and beyond. Her own revolt taking the form of sleeping in until noon with manga piled high, threatening to fall at any moment, a yearning seizes Mari. Faced with hardly any time left to clear goals blissfully scrawled in a middle school journal, it’s a notion that understandably drives Mari to tears, silencing her younger self waxing philosophical on society’s shackles and liberation. Reminiscent of Mari’s psychic landscape, this sense of deep and personal stagnancy likewise oozes into every frame as the steady fall of rain further dampens a muggy palette; pathetic fallacy serving as yet another obstacle to be transcended on Mari’s quest towards independence.

At sixteen one is seldom sure of who they are as an individual, impulsively stumbling into hare-brained schemes in order to make sense of it all (but more importantly, of themselves). Over the course of A Place Further Than the Universe’s premiere Mari proves to be no different as she giddily indulges in haphazard strategies in order to make the most of this period. Stuffing clothes into an overnight bag, elevated by romantic whimsies involving trains rushing in the opposite direction of school, being whisked away to this glittering expanse of a beach more ideal than place where liberation and individuality are seemingly tangible objects to be acquired. Unsurprisingly, at this point she has not found what is needed to take that crucial step forward. Sharp attention to detail highlights breezy platitudes tacked onto classroom walls, ethical reminders in train station, a life encased by trivialities. Mari seeks a form of personal liberation beyond these restrictive structures, yet finds herself uncertain, afraid. She always holds back when it counts; the unfettered awe of her younger self held in sharp juxtaposition to her current self, downcast gaze and ruminating over a message almost running on autopilot in its regaling of the daily minutiae; a restrained, tedious hum forever in earshot. Here the rain is at its strongest, and we wonder if it will ever stop. If Mari will ever manage to dispel it.


Despite the rain’s negative associations it eventually points towards rebirth, conjuring forth a profound element of catharsis on both Mari and Shirase’s behalf. It is certainly by no means a coincidence that the book Shirase’s mother wrote is the brightest element to appear in A Place Further Than the Universe’s premiere, this dazzling blue representing freedom in all its unrestrained splendour free from congested platforms and narrow halls where sneering voices of dissent echo. Its significance is breath-taking, idyllic sands once reserved to Mari’s imagination brought to life with the sun hanging high in the sky, frozen reaches at last providing a feasible means of liberation so desperately longed for. “Let them say what they want”, Shirase says; the beach taken a level beyond and made flesh. Illuminated by a similar sun in all its glittering brilliance, it seems that the rain has been dispelled at long last for both girls. As someone that has consistently put herself through the emotional wringer, Mari finds a kindred spirit in the subjugated Shirase who gave it her all striving towards what she believes in.

Unlike superficially comparable four-girls-in-a-club series driven by relatively esoteric pursuits, giving the impression that in the industry’s current iteration creators are unable to write about more offbeat interests without somehow involving sixteen-year-old girls, within A Place Further Than the Universe’s stunningly realized world high school proves to be more burden than release. Caught in the interstice where freedom hangs precariously in the balance, Shirase’s objective involving traveling to Antarctica is looked down upon by those who ought to know better, viewed as a source of derision by her peers. Having sacrificed her social life working tirelessly away at odd jobs, it is with a level of understated poignancy that Shirase doesn’t immediately take to Mari’s ardent zeal knowing all too well of the difficulties involved. It is only natural for people to get scared, to fear the dramatic changes in their own lives, and on a broader level, fear society itself.


During this sequence water imagery once again rises to the surface as shots of dripping taps and close-ups of sodden shoes reappear; Mari’s fear and uncertainty once again looming, threatening to drag her back down to sombre depths just as it did every other time. Yet through meeting Shirase she has found a means of battling through that storm, rushing past this suggestive mesh of tangled wire running alongside a gleaming river. A new day has dawned, free of rain, where Shirase and Mari may at last run towards liberation and individuality together sans society’s judgement. The pile of manga has tumbled, the crowded platforms all but abandoned with their gazes firmly trained on a place further than the universe.



6 thoughts on “Weathering the Adolescent Storm: A Place Further Than the Universe and Liberation

    • nana says:

      Couldn’t agree with you more, seems like it managed to catch most of the anime community off guard which is always such a lovely thing to see. Just goes to show that series involving four-girls-in-a-club should never be written off so easily!

      And ahhh I hope so too, I’m really looking forward to seeing how the group will manage to juggle their studies with going to Antarctica – something I have no doubt the show *will* cover since it seems to be more concerned in those grounded conceits, injecting an element of realism into the narrative.


  1. Perlem says:

    This was so much fun to read. Your sentences are masterfully crafted and they just put a smile on my face. You perfectly encaptured what this first episode was trying to say through these poetic lines. Bravo!


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